Resubmission of our AS opening sequence

We decided to resubmit our AS product. We watched our opening sequence and whilst watching it back we discussed as a group  that it looked very much like a music video. So we decided to change the order of the film, to make it less like a music video and more like a thriller opening sequence. Another reason we thought about changing the order was because we didnt want to give too much of the narrative away, but we realised that the way the clips and scenes are ordered it does. The third reason we decided to change it was that we didn't think the flashbacks were clear enough. Therefore, taking all of these elements into consideration we thought about swapping between the flashbacks and the hosptal scenes to make it clear that she was having the flashbacks whilst still lying on the hospital bed. Therefore, the crash would go at the end to start the film off.